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Sunday, January 25, 2015
Putting the critic, in travel.
Hello! My name is Hailey Crowell, the critic of travel destinations across the world. As a person with experience, I am here to help you avoid having a bad vacation. You spend a lot of money to travel to your desired destination and spend a lot of time planning. Your vacation should be all about YOU, not spent dealing with a disaster I can help you avoid. The reason I created my business, As the Crow Flies Travel Critic, Is because I have a passion for traveling. I have traveled all over the world and have stayed in and have been to places that I wish I would have not wasted my vacation on. By following my blog postings every Sunday night at midnight I can give you insider tips to make your dream vacation a success. Let me deal with cutting the stress out of your vacation, and relax with the travel critic who wants to make it all about you. Thank you for following, I appreciate your support.
Your blog is beautiful; although, you need to change the transparency and add text boxes so you can see the words against the background. I would also suggest proofreading to make sure your work flows well.
I love your business concept! You do, however, have some grammatical issues (Run on sentences, etc.) Make sure your "Disclaimer" says "Disclaimer" Also, I think your logo would be more successful if it was less informational. Simplify it. If you need any help with tweaking the logo, I can offer you some help :) Can't wait to see what you post next!! Make this FUN!!!
Thank you Alyssa and Brown Bottle Delivery Co. for visiting my blog and leaving me feedback. I have been working with someone to change the transparency of my text boxes so the words are easier for my followers to read, I am hoping to have the problem resolved soon.
Your blog is beautiful; although, you need to change the transparency and add text boxes so you can see the words against the background. I would also suggest proofreading to make sure your work flows well.
ReplyDeleteI love your business concept! You do, however, have some grammatical issues (Run on sentences, etc.) Make sure your "Disclaimer" says "Disclaimer" Also, I think your logo would be more successful if it was less informational. Simplify it. If you need any help with tweaking the logo, I can offer you some help :) Can't wait to see what you post next!! Make this FUN!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Alyssa and Brown Bottle Delivery Co. for visiting my blog and leaving me feedback. I have been working with someone to change the transparency of my text boxes so the words are easier for my followers to read, I am hoping to have the problem resolved soon.
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